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الموضوع: [Poem] The Moment

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    افتراضي [Poem] The Moment



    The moment


    The moment freezes on the rock
    A deathless wave huge as eternity crashes into it
    The moment, solid as the rock it’s perching upon,
    Opens its arms to the provocations of the sea,
    To lick at its still heart,
    Infuse its raging soul with light.

    A moment in search of a time,
    A minute’s pulse,
    A flower’s bud.

    Mistress of the Sea,
    The seagulls hover over your crown of seaweed,
    Muttering silent prayers that,
    Fall upon you like a basketful of dreams.
    Your eyebrow turns into a rainbow.
    An instant smooth as a swan’s down passes by,
    The rainbow shivers like a wounded bird,
    And it fades away as the last seagull dives into the sun.

    A grain of salt breaks free from a receding wave,
    And flies into your eyes.
    It hangs on your eyelash,
    Like a child clutching to its mother’s breast,
    A dewdrop clinging to a petal,
    Or a shadow racing after a moon's ray.
    It hangs there a solitary chandelier,
    Alone as love,
    Sad as a voyage.

    A moment silent like a window,
    A broken sword,
    Solitary as sand in a seashell.

    You pray the grain of salt holds on to your eyelash.
    Your soul weeps streams of wine,
    Drunken smiles,
    Knives stained with sunset,
    Silences nailed into a hurried cloud.

    A weeping that is so harsh like a crowded cemetery
    A deathless gaze heavy with longing bursts on the shore
    A renewed suffering pricks your eyelid.
    Like a shadow taken unawares it quivers,
    Slowly opening like a sleepless yawn,
    A forgotten wound breaks open,
    A seashell erupts in the depths of a womb,
    The last breath swells in the throat of a dying soldier.

    O Eyelid! Stay still lest you murder the grain of salt,
    Lest you strike the moment a second death!


    3/10/09
    لكل عصر حرب طروادته الخاصّة

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    awesome :D
    the first stanza is my fav also I like the forth
    keep it up
    thanks 4 share

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    awwwwwww

    well done CD

    i loved this part

    Mistress of the Sea,
    The seagulls hover over your crown of seaweed,
    Muttering silent prayers that,
    Fall upon you like a basketful of dreams.
    Your eyebrow turns into a rainbow.
    An instant smooth as a swan’s down passes by,
    The rainbow shivers like a wounded bird,
    And it fades away as the last seagull dives into the sun.



    lol esp the part in red ;)

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    lol there is a swan, dew drop and salt in this poem :D

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    lol there is a swan, dew drop and salt in this poem :D
    yeah and i loved the Swan part :o

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    eternity is there too :)

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Elvira مشاهدة المشاركة
    eternity is there too :)
    yah right I forget :D
    this make them 4 girls

    remaing two sugar and me:clap:

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    yeah la

    CD how come i done see suga and Katolie in ur poem?!

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Elvira مشاهدة المشاركة
    yeah la

    CD how come i done see suga and Katolie in ur poem?!
    at the time the poem is written, I wasn't a member of any forum :D

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    :eek: wow! Amazingly cute!
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    :eek: 3/10/09


    yeah

    how did he know me :D

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    It all comes down to coincidence :D

    I wish that I one day can write a poem in which I include the names of all the girls I know :D
    لكل عصر حرب طروادته الخاصّة

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    yeah that would be great

    ok start writen ;)

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    will be waiting :D

 

 

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